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OMGGGG~~~~ My first fully pencil shaded pic everrrrrr o3o~~~

I just had this idea of a girl doing this pose in my head, sketched it, then decided to do pencil work XD

I like it a lot...hmmm...hmmmmmm.
But I still want lots of critiques 'cuz I'm very new to this and I want to improve. :nod:

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Special thanks to and for helping me with the anatomy and teaching me how to shade :heart:

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:iconchibby:
Nice!!!
I like the way you did the contours of her body =D
But where is the brightest focused light source btw @_@;;;

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Top left? A bit out to the viewer (thinking 3d) o_O~~

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:iconchibby:
so the light is shining towards the viewer? @_@
I'm just abit confused about the light source... not enough contrast maybe? ^^;

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:iconyunalesca-strife:
i think its gorgeous. it looks like nothing youve ever done, the face is amazing and i love her slippers. the only thing thats even a little off is the hand, and i cant even pin point where the problem in it are. i just think its lovely.
:iconsylvansymphony:
I love her hair O: To add on chibby's comment, the light source is a bit confusing. It looks like it's coming from the front of the girl but also coming towards the front of the screen (eg. the viewer is a light source)

I like what you did with this, though! The plants in the background add a nice touch. :'D
:iconjuunana:
wow i love her back...the pose is gorgeous and you drew it perfect:)lovely pic:)

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:iconachefloeresound:
It's so wonderful! The anatomy is incredible and I love the shading ^.^

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:iconafordite:
woww, just have one word "fantastic"
:iconneki:
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:iconcyber-shady:
Wow that's incredible. I love her pose, you are so good at anatomy :clap: Awesome shading too. Very well done :D

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